TIL: It took me 45 minutes to figure out a single sentence in my fantasy novel

I spent way too long trying to make this one line about a character casting a spell sound natural and not like a DnD manual. Anybody else get stuck on tiny details like that for way longer than you'd expect?

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wendyprice23d ago

oh man, i've totally been there lol

jasonf1723d ago

wait WHAT? @wendyprice you actually sat through all three hours of that lecture before you realized? i would've been out the door ten minutes in max lol

milaw1422d ago

haha yeah ten minutes max is generous